Chapter 2 is up!
Chapter 2 from Tale of the Wisconsin Werewolf is up and running!
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To those of you who read the first draft, you’ll notice a lot of new material in this chapter. I filled in several unresolved issues, and I think it turned out adding a lot of character to the book’s beginning. But adding too much in a second draft can be dangerous – it can slow down the pace and needlessly bulk up the book. I kept that in mind, but I must say I’m happy with the additions.
What do YOU think? does this chapter keep with the pace of the book? Is the information about Will’s inheritance / another funeral more than you wanted to know? Or does it help you better grasp the characters and the plot? Let me know!